This film is nothing like any other film, there are surprises around every corner. It's not your traditional film with a happy ending, it challenges the traditional romantic comedy film. Although this film challenges the traditional romantic comedy, the moral shows anything can happen to anyone. Many people always say that nothing bad will happen to them, when in reality they can't predict the future and anything can happen at any moment. Taylor always thinks nothing bad will happen to her, and after something bad happens, Taylor thinks of what could happen, but always says, "that will never happen to me". This film shows how anything can happen to anyone, so you should never assume and always try your hardest. Come have a laugh, but learn a valuable lesson in theaters June 2032.
Ideal Cast
Charlize Theron(Taylor)
Beau Kazer(Uber driver)
Bradley Cooper(Zack)
Daniel Boulud(Daniel Boulud)
Merle Dandridge(Paramedic 1)
Jill Flint (Paramedic 2)
Eve Best(Dr. Cooper)
Zoey Barkow(Nurse)
Emma Stone(Hostess)
Julia Roberts(Manager)
Sabrina Carpenter(Allie)
Sandra Bullock (Kate)
Melonie Diaz(Hannah)
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think you did a great job switching the traditional story line up. i enjoyed reading a story ling that goes riches to rags instead of rags to riches.
ReplyDeleteYour story felt like it had an actual, real progression to it. I felt as though the story had an interesting plot and wanted to keep on reading through to the end.
ReplyDeleteThe story had a great plot line. I like how within the story anything can happen to any character. Great job exceeding all your intentions.
ReplyDeleteI thought the plot you used was very creative and worked well! Your intentions were met!
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job putting a twist on the traditional story line and plot. This was a really creative idea for a plot line and you did a great job accomplishing your intentions.
ReplyDeleteI liked the screenplay a lot, it makes me think about the movie Chef. And looking at her intentions they were all met.
ReplyDeleteWhen I was reading this screenplay I thought I was reading a script to a movie which really impressed me. After looking at the intentions I can say you have met all of them.
ReplyDeleteWhen comparing the screenplay to Amanda's intensions it is very clear that they are all met. I really liked the plot of this and I thought Amanda did such a good job.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how Amanda was able to achieve her goals in the story and challenging the main charter is different ways.
ReplyDeleteAmanda did an awesome job of not only accomplishing her intentions but also entertaining the audience. I loved the clear progression of this film. It shows true talent in screenplaying.
ReplyDeleteI was so interested in this screenplay that I wanted to continue to read and follow the plot. All of your intentions were met from what I read but it was also extremely entertaining and progressive.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was interesting how you chose to make Taylor's life fall apart rather than come together. You really accomplished your intentions
ReplyDeleteI really like how you foreshadowed how something bad would happen to the main character in order to show how anything can happen to anyone. This was a very entertaining screenplay and you met all of your intentions.
ReplyDeleteThis screenplay was really well written and you met the intention of not making the ending obvious. It wasn't a traditional storyline and I think you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteI love how you challenged the average plot line by kind of doing it in reverse. The screenplay was super engaging and the story was really cool.
ReplyDeleteThis is a good screen play that shows how Taylor overcomes being left and fired.
ReplyDeleteThe screenplay was very entertaining too, it kept the audience wanting to read more about what was going to happen next.
ReplyDeleteHaving Charlize Theron play this kind of role is extremely interesting. While she is normally in action films (Mad Max Fury Road, Snow White and the Huntsman, Atomic Blonde, etc, and I even cast her as my movie's villain), having her play an "average" character gives this story a new flavor to it that no other movie staring her has had.
ReplyDeleteLong but good read. it was nice to experience the progressions of character for example a reoccurring Uber drive. I like the ending it was unexpected and the way you presented it was very well done.
ReplyDeleteYour screenplay was so impressive. Really was so professional. You met all of your intentions. Well done.
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