BLACK WIDOW:
Just like BUDAPEST all over again!
HAWKEYE:
You and I remember Budapest very differently.
Above are two lines from the movie The Avengers. Many hardcore Marvel fans have pondered the question: What happened in Budapest? Introducing the new movie: Black Widow, written by Sarah Hoffman.
Agent Coulson of SHIELD sends Agent Clint Barton, aka Hawkeye, on a mission to take out the infamous ex-KGB assassin Natalya “Natasha” Romanova, known as the Black Widow. They believe that she is after Svetlana Markovitchka, the CEO of the tech company AIM, a SHEILD ally, after many lawmakers in Budapest are killed with the signature methods of the Black Widow. Clint accepts the mission and flies out to Budapest, where he meets Natasha and she bests him in combat. They start talking, and Natasha shows Clint that AIM is corrupt. She describes her life in the Red Room, where she was trained. She talks of a fellow trainee, Yelena (nickname Lena), who was killed because they were friends. She tells him her story, finally convincing Clint to help her. Together, they infiltrate AIM, with Clint as Svetlana’s bodyguard and Natasha as a secretary. Natasha hacks into the security system, disarms it, then finds evidence of a secret room on the premises. She calls Clint and together they enter the secret room and find it full of weapons. There is also a single red book with a black star on it (note: if you have not seen Captain America: Civil War, you will not know the significance of this book). It connects AIM to the super soldiers, and proves that they are corrupt. As Natasha reads the Russian words inside the book out loud, Svetlana enters and reveals herself as Yelena, who Natasha thought was dead, but just had a serum that removed emotions injected into her (for all the Doctor Who fans reading this, Yelena is very similar to a Dalek: no emotions except for hate and anger). She knocks out Clint with a tranquilizer and fights Natasha. When Natasha calls her Lena, the old Lena comes out briefly, begging Natasha to kill her. She does so, and SHEILD hires her as an agent. There are also two post credit scenes: one referencing CA:CW and another where Clint meets Laura (his future wife) for the first time.
Ideal Cast:
Scarlet Johansson - Natasha Romanova/Black Widow
Jeremy Renner - Clint Barton/Hawkeye
Clark Gregg - Agent Coulson
Charlize Theron - Svetlana Markovitchka/Yelena Belovna
Stan Lee - Informant
Samuel L. Jackson - Director Fury
Gene Farber - Karkov
Sebastian Stan - Bucky/Winter Soldier
Linda Cardellini - Laura
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DeleteYou did a great job giving most of the screenplay time to Hawk-eye and Black Widow. This means that you did a great job in accomplishing your second intention. The screenplay focused on dialogue and the development of the relationships over the screenplay.
ReplyDeleteLoved this! The intentions were met! I really liked the concept of this and I'm sure a lot of Marvel fans would too.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you focused on the relationship between Hawkeye and Black Widow. I don't know either of the characters, but after reading it I knew about them.
ReplyDeleteI like how you were able to give the black widow a humanistic quality through her emotions and her relationship with Hawkeye. I personally don't like marvel movies but this screenplay had me interested in the marvel world.
ReplyDeleteI like how you gave Black Widow a humanistic quality through her emotions in her backstory because it makes the audience not know whether to hate her or to take her side. Good Job
ReplyDeleteI like how you gave the Black Widow a backstory in order to make her have more humanistic qualities. It was different from most marvel movies in my opinion, and I really enjoyed the dialogue and emotions you provided.
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ReplyDeleteI have never seen anything to do with the Black Widow but this made me very interested to watch more about it.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you got the idea of your screenplay just from the line in avengers. Super creative and being a fan of Marvel movies and Agents of Shield i found this to be enjoyable Good job
ReplyDeleteYou did such a great job accomplishing your intentions. Made your screenplay flow so well. Good job.
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