The Classroom is a situational comedy or sitcom, that focuses on the daily activities of average high school students. It's humor is based off of the popular show The Office, where the characters are frequently shown in interview style scenes. These scenes will have an unknown interviewer ask a question and the scene will contain only the character's response to the question. The series has many subsidiary characters that all have different quirky personalities, such as the main character Tomas Torres. His trusting personality often gets him in trouble when he asks for help. Blu Windle will say or do anything to get an easy laugh, usually at Tomas's expense. K.J. has an intense passion for Japanese culture and Nintendo games, often times honing his gaming skills with his friends at school. Many other characters with differing personalities populate the show along with thee three main characters. Each episode has many different conflicts which sometimes intertwine and tangle at certain points in the episodes. In the most recent episode Tomas faces the challenges of finding a date for the dance, simply parking his car, and making more friends. Meanwhile Chris has his first interview from the prestigious school, Maine Lanyardtime Academy. Will these two teenagers make it through the day?
Ideal Cast
Tomas Torres
Chris Link
K.J.
Mikey Botta
Will Bologna
Tom Hanks
Bret Halkyard
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I thought you had some good and unique characters. Their personalities really made the screenplay really interesting.
ReplyDeleteyou did a really great job portraying the characters personalities. you did a good job at showing instead of telling.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you kept the voice and attitude of the characters through both dialogue and action blocks. In addition, your characterization is really funny and exaggerated.
ReplyDeleteIt was really funny an you got The Office feel through the characters personalities. You also accomplished the intention of showing instead of telling, with describing the person's looks instead of saying he was upset. Overall it was really funny.
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ReplyDeleteChris did a good job of accomplishing his first intention by showing how the characters are feeling rather than telling. Also, Chris did a good job of making the humor similar to The Office because he keeps the humor very dry and the characters don't really react to something funny.
ReplyDeleteThe writing was very well done and gave everyone a good laugh. It helped you understand the characters well and their issues.
ReplyDeleteChris did a great job of writing funny, entertaining dialogue. Michael then did a great job recorded it like interviews from different angles. Overall this was one of the best screenplays.
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ReplyDeleteYou did a great job of showing how the characters feel and the audience can really understand their personalities. The humor was also very similar to The Office.
ReplyDeleteYou did an amazing job of showing the characters personalities. The humor was very similar to the office and the plot was so funny.
ReplyDeleteBoth of you did a great job! Chris accomplished his intention of showing rather than telling. Also this was excellent because it really stayed true to The Office's dry humor. The fourth wall was successfully broken. THIS ROCKED:)
ReplyDeleteEven though I have not seen the office that much, I was able to tell that you were portraying the Office's humor with the words. And Mike breaking the fourth wall just like the Office was great.
ReplyDeleteChris's screenplay was great. It went along with the film adaptation perfectly. All intentions were meet. 10/10.
ReplyDeleteChris did a great job of showing not telling. The comedy cracked me up i had tears in my eyes.
ReplyDeleteChris did a great job on showing the different characters personalities. The audience was really able to understand who they were.
ReplyDeleteThis screenplay is awesome and I love how we were able to see it come to life through Mike Loh's film. You really captured the same tone as the office and found a way to make this humorous but relatable.
ReplyDeleteWell done and it has a very natural feel reading it. Your third intention was very well carried out. The story progressed naturally as well as being funny.
ReplyDeleteThis film was actually the best thing I've ever seen. The use of humor over the course of the film really was great. I wish this film was 4 hours because I could watch it over and over again.
ReplyDeleteyou did a great job of creating your characters with the dry humor. it was very funny and you completed all your intentions.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job taking the humor of the office and making it really similar to your humor. What the main characters would say would be something the office cast would say so i thought it was really good.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job with mirroring The Office dialogue style. You met all of your intentions and the screenplay was awesome.
ReplyDeleteThis was hilarious and very well made. each character had a distinct personality and little quirks that made the show interesting
ReplyDeleteThis was hilarious. It was such a nice twist of The Office. Great job. Favorite Screenplay.
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