Marked changes the way female leads are seen by creating a brave character through her actions. She takes charge of situations without second guesses herself in order to help the greater good. This movie also shocks the viewers by bringing up details introduced at the beginning of the movie at the very end. This causes viewers to be in suspense and then shocked. This movie establishes an assertive tone through the main characters and how determined they are to stand up for what they believe in. All together this is a movie that should be on everyone's to watch list. It will inspire the minds of young woman to show them that they can do anything if they put their mind to it. This way woman will realize that just because they are in love does not mean it weakens them. Marked is a unique film that will change the concept of romantic films forever. Not only young woman would enjoy this film, but also boys will enjoy the action that is packed into this film. Between fights and comedy mixed into this romantic film it creates a movie that everyone can enjoy!
Ideal Cast
Blair- Lily Collins
Mother- Katie Holmes
Samantha- Mckenna Grace
Dr. Zine- Todd Stashwick
Pace- Lucas Till
Zach- Chris Pratt
Trevor- Chris Hemsworth
Jackie did a good job with creating an assertive tone from her main female character standing up for what she believes in and loving Trevor. She did a good job with accomplishing all your her tones.
ReplyDeleteJackie did a great job accomplishing her intentions. Her topic of love created a good tone that was very entertaining to the audience.
ReplyDeleteJackie did a great job accomplishing her goal of creating an assertive tone through the main character. The main character's dialogue and actions depicted the tone really well.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed Jackie's screenplay, because I think it is a good mix of comedy and romance. I also like how it was not your typical rom com. I really liked it! She met her intensions.
ReplyDeleteJackie I really enjoyed reading your screenplay because of the great mix of both comedy and romance. This is what made the screenplay unique, while still meeting all of your intentions.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how Jackie made the main character take control of her life and did a twist on classic love stories . The story line also had good humor to it and though Jackie met her intentions very well.
ReplyDeleteJackie did a great job of meeting all of her intentions. I really liked the twist at the end.
ReplyDeleteyou did a good job accomplishing all your intentions. i really liked the comedic aspect of your screen play.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you created an assertive tone through a powerful female lead in your screenplay. It differs from the traditional love story. The dialogue was very intriguing and it was not only romantic, but comedic.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job creating suspense by leaving the audience hanging at times. By not giving the audience an inside look all the time in the screenplay, they are left wondering. You made this untraditional and did a great job.
ReplyDeleteI think this screenplay could be really inspiring to females if it came out as a film. I like how you have the main dominant character a strong female.
ReplyDeleteThe female lead was inspirational. It is a different screenplay, which makes it interesting. You clearly accomplished your intentions. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThis is honestly such a good idea for a film. It goes along with some of the distopian stuff that has been popular for the past few years. The idea is original and your screenplay does it justice. All of your intentions were met.
ReplyDeleteI thought that this screenplay was really funny at some parts. It is also pretty unique.
ReplyDeleteI liked how the suspense in this screenplay and the comic relief combine to make a really good screenplay!
ReplyDeleteThis book creates a strong female lead who, even though a love interest is present, still has a personality and strength entirely her own. This creates an excellent role model for girls, and shows the importance of freedom.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was a great screenplay even it showed a contrast from normal female leads who seem helpless and rely on the man they love as well as a contrast from strong independent women who stay single and don't rely on anyone. Fun read!
ReplyDeleteGreat job with achieving all of your intentions. Loved the romance in the screenplay. Made it hard to stop reading.
ReplyDeleteJackie did a great job on this screenplay! I love the strong female lead and the love interest throughout the play. You also did a great job of achieving your intentions!
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