Monday, May 29, 2017

"The Chalice: A Journey Begins" by Zach Herbert

'The Chalice: A Journey Begins' is a two part short movie.  This being part one, obviously, gives the background of our heroes and their tragic past.  The two boys eventually meet a mystical old man, named Deemas played by Ian McKellen, and are brought upon an adventure to take down the evil Darth Warlock.  Who had taken not only the Chalice de Lightsaber, but the life of the boys', Falkor (played by Chris Hemsworth) and Fox's (played by Robbie Amell), mother.  But what Deemas didn't know was that the boys were never in it for the safety of all Space and the creatures who live in it, but for pure revenge of their mother.  The boys and Deemas have to find a way to take the Chalice from Darth Warlock and if that is not hard enough, they then have to travel across the galaxy to deliver to to Starship Gandalph to destroy it and it's powers for good.  Will they do it or will they all perish at the hands of Darth Warlock? Just watch and see for yourself.

The critics have been raving about this new series due to it's uniqueness from the use of both sic-fi and fantasy.  And because of that it will be attracting many varieties of people. Ranging from older ones who are attracted to the maturity of the fantasy/ middle-earth thing it has going for it.  And it will attract the younger generation with the special effects it will be using for the sic-fi portion of the film.  Not only will the type of movie get people to come but the actors in the movie will as well.  With leading role Chris Hemsworth as Falkor and Ian McKellen as Deemas, this short film will be attracting an audience from the Marvel Cinematic Universe from Thor and Magneto.  While this movie will not be hitting the theaters due to its lack of length in time, when it is on Demand in the summer, people will have to stop going to theaters just to watch this.

Ideal Cast
Chris Hemsworth - Falkor
Robbie Amell - Fox
Ian McKellen - Deemas
Heath Ledger - Darth Warlock
Steve Buscemi - Ludo



https://drive.google.com/a/sparta.org/file/d/0B5-aYfBnQ3UTODAxdjJJYllFQ28/view?usp=sharing

25 comments:

  1. This narrative gives a very mystical tone. This narrative gives a very interesting mood to the audience, which is cool.

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  2. This screenplay was awesome. Something that really stands out to me is that this screenplay is original. Just like you said in the first intention you did a great job in doing this. Awesome Job!!

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  3. You did a good job of featuring your characters best qualities as they overcome seemingly impossible tasks. The combination of different genres was also very interesting.

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  4. Zach combined mystery magical and technoglogy to create this screenplay. They accomplished fighting the random jerk. There is a lot of unexpected action and Zach did a good job of portraying it.

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  5. From what we read, all of Zach's intentions were met. I like the sci fi aspect that is included.

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  6. You did a great job achieving your narrative intentions. The characters were funny.

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  7. Zach did a very good job with his screenplay. He met his intentions by following a traditional science fiction path.

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  8. You did a great job at meeting your intentions, and the characters were funny instead of really serous.

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  9. good job reaching all your intentions! i liked how your characters were funny.

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  10. The characters had a funny humor about them and you did a good job at giving them different personalities. This made the story funny and you met you goals but providing a cliff hanger at the end.

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  11. I liked how you juxtaposed the futuristic setting with the medieval fantastical characters. This effectively accomplished your first intention.

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  12. I liked how you juxtaposed the futuristic setting with the medieval fantastical characters. This effectively accomplished your first intention.

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  13. Zach did a great job with accomplishing all his intentions. The characters were funny and had humor instead of being serious.

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  14. I really liked how the characters accomplished things they never thought they could, it was inspiring. Also I liked the combination of mystical and technology

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  15. I really liked the character names. They were really interesting, and I thought they fit the setting really well. I also found it humorous while still seeing a little seriousness in the story.

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  16. I really like how you accomplished your third intention of having the main characters overcome obstacles they never thought they could. The characters were funny and i thought it was a good screenplay.

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  17. I like this screenplay because it was different than most of the other screenplays since you took a sci-fi approach. You also did a great job of accomplishing your intentions while creating humorous characters.

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  18. This screenplay was a really good sci fi and it was really interesting to read about the characters and watch them overcome challenging obstacles. I also really liked how it was very different from every other screenplay!

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  19. I really enjoyed the originality of the screenplay, you did a good job at fulfilling your intentions. Really good work!

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  20. The way you displayed different genres into one was very good and made it fun to read.

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  21. I also likes how he had his characters overcome obstacles, it made the screenplay more realistic and helped with the audience reading it.

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  22. I liked how you mentioned the appeal to MCU fans because of the actors in the movie. As an MCU fan myself, and knowing others as well, I can confirm that, as a marketing strategy, that would completely 100% work.

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  23. Upon reading over your first intention prior to reading the screenplay, I thought it would be too difficult to accomplish in just a few pages but I must say you did a very good job of switching things up and I thought that there was the perfect blend of the two centralized main ideas; technology and fantasy. I also enjoyed how you developed the characters through their perseverance through challenges and their motivation of strive for success. Overall, it was well constructed and quite entertaining to read.

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  24. I like t=how you created a backstory to the brothers by giving them motive through the death of their mother. i also enjoy the relationship the brothers have. they don't always agree 100% but they always have each others back.

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  25. I really enjoyed the originality of the screenplay, you did a good job at fulfilling your intentions. Really good work!

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