Ideal Cast:
Richard: Joseph Gordon-Levitt
Rachel: Cara Delevingne
Old Lady: Betty White
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B38Yl1FvqLLcQUxYOVNySXozcnM
Monday, May 29, 2017
The Surprise of Inevitibility - Ben Lee
In a not so nice apartment lives Richard. He's a school teacher at an elementary school across town. He goes to work, goes home, grades papers, and repeats. His only excitement in life is every Friday, his best friend Rachel comes by at the dead of night looking for a place to stay. She leads an exciting life, with a boyfriend that goes clubbing with her and takes her to exotic places. One night, she comes crying to his door, where she asks for a place to sleep, then passes out on him. This leaves him with a plethora of questions. Is Richard capable of handling her emotional baggage, as well as his own? And will their friendship survive the coming events?
Ideal Cast:
Richard: Joseph Gordon-Levitt
Rachel: Cara Delevingne
Old Lady: Betty White
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B38Yl1FvqLLcQUxYOVNySXozcnM
Ideal Cast:
Richard: Joseph Gordon-Levitt
Rachel: Cara Delevingne
Old Lady: Betty White
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B38Yl1FvqLLcQUxYOVNySXozcnM
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After reading some of Bens scene play and looking at his intentions I thoroughly believe that he met every intention. It took a while to get there, but over time everything was met.
ReplyDeleteAfter the first few pages, you did indeed use mostly dialogue. By only including Richard, Rachel, and the old woman, you kept the cast small and intimate. He created a love story through rachel and richard. good work.
ReplyDeleteBen definitely completed his objectives. Most of the scenes were consistently dialogue, and the small cast made the scenes intimate.
ReplyDeleteYou completed your objectives by having the small intimate cast with lots of talking. It was also more realistic in my opinion so great job.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job with the small cast. Even with the small cast you made an awesome screenplay.
ReplyDeleteYou were able to hit the objectives that were set. The cast was small, but made it good for the story line and easer to follow
ReplyDeleteBen Lee accomplished his goals by using a lot of dialogue and a small cast. I really like how most of this screenplay is dialogue.
ReplyDeleteBen Lee did a really good job with accomplishing all of his intentions. He managed to create a really good screenplay with a small cast.
ReplyDeleteThis screenplay does a good job of painting the audience a picture through the dialogue. Ben implies most of the details through this method.
ReplyDeletegood job accomplishing all of your intentions. after a couple pages you did a great job of using mostly all dialogue.
ReplyDeleteHaving a small cast really allowed you to get into the characters and let the audience know about their personalities. I could definitely see this story happening to anyone its not dramatic like Hollywood makes it.
ReplyDeleteBen definitely completed his intention in the screenplay having mostly dialogue. The scenes were more realistic with more dialogue.
ReplyDeleteThis screen play had a lot of dialog which made it different from everyone else's in a positive way. It also was one of your goals so you were able to accomplish that well.
ReplyDeleteThe intention about keeping your cast small was well accomplished which made every character's dialogue important and didn't have any fluff.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you differed from the usual Hollywood romantic movie, you really accomplished your intention. Also, the use of a minimal amount of characters made for a very involved storyline.
ReplyDeleteThe fact that you used only three characters made it much easier to connect with each of them. And the fact that the screen play was mostly dialogue was very interesting to read even though I do not enjoy reading.
ReplyDeleteEven though the cast is extremely small, you did a great job of meeting all of your intentions and creating a successful screenplay. I loved all of the dialogue because it made the script easy to read and follow along. It also made it easy to connect to the characters and get to know their personality better.
ReplyDeleteThe small cast helps put emphasis on the overall story line of the script. It eliminates a lot of distractions. You accomplished all of your intentions.
ReplyDeleteHaving more dialogue was good since it had more emphasis on the entire story and entertained the audience more.
ReplyDeleteThe screenplay met its intentions in a clever way. I liked the heavy amount of dialogue since it made the screenplay very straightforward.
ReplyDeleteAll intentions were met, and the casualness and straightforwardness of the dialogue defined the characters well.
ReplyDeleteBen, I liked your plan to keep the cast of characters small because it gives the story that strong connection between the audience and the characters and makes the story more intimate as a whole. I also enjoyed the fact that you brought the typical Hollywood story and brought it back down to earth. It seemed to me that it made the story more believable and applicable to today's world. Very nice job!
ReplyDeleteI liked how even though it was a small cast, you really made it work with the plot. You did a good job accomplishing your intentions.
ReplyDeleteThis screen play had a lot of dialog which made it different from everyone else's in a positive way. It also was one of your goals so you were able to accomplish that well.
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